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Alone

like the last leaf before winter's chill i hang on this branch tired and alone waiting for a gust of wind that never comes to set me free i cling on lifeless blank of all color thirsting for something more than this frigid air to hold me tight yet night arrives showing off the fullness of moon but my shadow remains empty like footsteps in yesterday's snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/27/2013 10:03:00 PM
This is a heartfelt and emotional poem. You took the reader on a journey of your loneliness and needing someone there for you. Nice job Thanks for the nice comment on my Wishes poem.
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Date: 11/29/2012 7:28:00 PM
Very beautiful!
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Date: 11/24/2012 2:40:00 PM
As always you paint emotions so beautifuly. Even when you make them blank of color. Stunning piece, I am definately a fan. You continue to amaze me.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/24/2012 4:53:00 PM
wow...thank you for your sweet reply!
Date: 11/23/2012 4:36:00 PM
Its usually when im lonely im at my most creative, and obviously by this piece so are you Sandra, very nice , blessings, Carl
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/24/2012 4:55:00 PM
thank you Carl :)
Date: 11/21/2012 10:18:00 AM
You tell a sad tale here very movingly! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/24/2012 5:18:00 PM
thank you Matthew :) Hugs Sandy
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/24/2012 4:55:00 PM
Thank you Anish!
Date: 11/20/2012 8:37:00 PM
Sorry to read that you feel so alone.Well hey,as long as your here,you won't be alone.People here can fill you with new life.And all you need to do is accept it. <3 (o:
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2012 8:41:00 PM
thank you Dan for being so kind..

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