Alone

Delicious love poems Full of delight and passion Words to remember My poem flows with loneliness He never loved me For the Sad Tanka contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/21/2012 10:28:00 PM

Barbara, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/31/2012 6:50:00 AM

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment on my poetry Barbara. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol

Robert Johnson

Date: 10/29/2012 12:32:00 PM

The empty sadness with no home. Awaiting new love for a poem. He never loved her, I don't know. A muse like this makes the ink flow.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2012 5:59:00 PM

didn't this make the list? ARe you kidding?

Annie Lander

Date: 10/10/2012 7:33:00 AM

pondering thoughts with this one good luck with the contest

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/9/2012 8:40:00 PM

Such a sad last line! Good luck in the contest Barbara! Hugs, Jack

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/9/2012 5:49:00 PM

That one is sad..I felt the pain..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve...Sara

Annie Lander

Date: 10/9/2012 5:42:00 PM

Good luck with the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2012 2:22:00 PM

oh, my, now this is wonderful. This could describe my sad one as well. What will I do now that you have done this? haha. Will have to put it another way!!!

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 10/8/2012 10:38:00 AM

A good write for the contest...much enjoyed!!!

Poet Tacito

Date: 10/8/2012 8:12:00 AM

Damn. I understand this all too well. Great job.

Kash Poet

Date: 10/8/2012 7:50:00 AM

Very nice BG...love this.