Alone

Crafting illustrations of endless doubts, Tirelessly exploring for those so-called peaceful where-abouts, Slowly illuminating those dark corners of paranoia, Trembling as the shadows conspire into black-hearted Casanovas, Conforming to the consistent routine, Abandoning yet another opportunity into the unchanging ravine, Idly watching the inevitable downfall to my sanity, Questioning myself, "Or is this how I view Humanity?"

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Shaz Cheesman

Date: 7/13/2013 1:08:00 AM

Hi Ty....Firstly - I like your abstract writing it's creative in itself and offers another dimension to the journey that your poem takes the reader on. Very insightful piece....great refelction and I like the question you pose on the final line....Shaz

Ty Price
Date: 7/15/2013 1:03:00 AM

Thak you for all the kind words. Happy to hear my writings being enjoyed!

Skyler Dawn

Date: 12/12/2012 8:11:00 PM

I really love your writing style. :)

Ty Price
Date: 12/13/2012 1:21:00 PM

thank you, I really appreciate it.

Cassidy Kee

Date: 6/20/2012 12:26:00 AM

Wow. Simply Wow. This poem was great! So much said in so little words. Let us together put this to the test and make a better world. Shall we? :) ~Cassidy

Ty Price
Date: 6/20/2012 1:00:00 AM

thank you for that. Im down to make a better world :D

Darrell Hoover

Date: 6/12/2012 7:51:00 AM

Nice...

Ty Price
Date: 6/13/2012 7:00:00 PM

thank you