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Alone

Its so dark and cold in here I'm so scared I could cry I keep turning in circles can't find a place to hide Why is this happening to me Will I ever find the light Why is this happening to me I don't know how much longer I can put up a fight Please can't you help me Help me find my way Please can't you save me Don't just sit and watch me Don't let me fade away Its so dark and cold in here I'm so scared I could cry I don't want to go in circles and no longer feel cold Take me with you please To a place we could hide Show me what life is about Then maybe the darkness will one day subside

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2011 7:14:00 AM

It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us Michelle. Love, Carol

Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/4/2011 11:43:00 AM

Powerful words Michelle, The light will shine in the end. Anne

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/2/2011 2:50:00 PM

Everybody can surely relate to this dark moments in life, michelle

Gabrielle Alcazaren

Date: 5/1/2011 9:56:00 PM

We've all been in a low place before and hopefully the darkness and cold you've encountered will subside. I think this could be a stronger piece if you used a little less repetition or separated it into stanzas. Also details and descriptions of the dark, the cold, the fear might help. Thanks for opening up, Michelle.