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Alone

A bandoned as if we never happened L ove erased, that has left my heart blackened O nly me as you have departed N ow I sit here pondering why we started E mpty and alone

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/11/2010 12:11:00 PM

alone is nothing but a saden thought of empty emotions. This is me when I was abndoned by my mother at 14. Alone and empty everyday, sad! sad ! sad!Enjoyed your acrostic,..p.d.

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/24/2010 1:32:00 PM

Captured the essence of alone in your Acrostic Mr. Hall ;-) you are not alone anymore

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2010 4:35:00 PM

Sad write...Keep writing and the healing will come..Thanks for the encouraging comments left on my write about the Canopy Of Trees..Sara

Chuck Keys

Date: 9/23/2010 2:05:00 PM

this is the bad side of love, great writing. thank you, chuck