Alone

The mirror speaks truth Her lonely eyes reflect grief Another day gone

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Sharon Winter

Date: 7/1/2009 11:17:00 AM

I know that mirror well. Thanks for the congrats Barbara. Have a wonderful 4th. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo

Cary Garavaglia

Date: 6/28/2009 3:31:00 PM

I have looked into the same mirror

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/28/2009 2:35:00 PM

looking at the glass mirror seeing our reflection of sadness and sorrow-------alone---this is deep and heartfelt emotions,sour ones well described--rememberance,loneliness--great writer you are,and this is a gem--charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2009 2:28:00 PM

Wow, this one surely comes from the depth of the human soul. Excellent "mirror" reflection on loneliness! Love, Carolyn

Date: 6/28/2009 12:37:00 PM

There is a lot of depth to this poem. I've already read it a few time. Nice one! Karen

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/28/2009 12:25:00 PM

beautiful, I wish she could walk around the lake w/me and watch the otters play....jimbo

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/28/2009 11:48:00 AM

Oh dear....such deep sadness in this short form. Well expressed, Barbara.