Alone

I’m alone in this house tonight, I’m fighting a losing fight. You left me and I don’t know why. It makes me cry When I think what we could have been. I am in A drunken stupor. You left me but I’ll love you forever more. I’m drowning here In my fear Of life without you. Because you see You are the girl of my dreams And it seems That you are gone forever And I will never Love another like I did you. I swear it’s true. I’m alone in this house tonight And it’s quite alright Because, yes, it’s true, I’m drunk and over you.

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Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 1/15/2009 1:16:00 PM

This is very impressive. I wrote a few poems when I was stoned once but I didn't try to make them rhyme, it was too hard to concentrate. When I was in your position I was tempted to hate anybody who claimed to understand what I was going through. I hope you won't make the same mistake.