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                   The way to heaven is within. Shake the wings of love-when love's ...

                    

 

' The way to heaven is within. Shake the wings of love--when love's wings have become strong, there's no need to trouble about a ladder' -- Rumi ~ Afloat on borderless curves of an airway, tinges of iridescent flame drape my essence in brush-stroked canvas from the purplish hint of mid-autumn... its velvet outline swirling along petals to gently unfold their varnished ribs imbuing fragrant whiffs, a melodic tune for rare dances of love's act… Two four eight clicks spin into kindness as wings circle ‘round my inner heaven studded with light, glittering rivering through the space of endless joy and warmth: How my core lingers in this dimension a need to reside with a calm spirit, magnanimous— ‘till my baby wails somewhere known rousing this consciousness back to real-world; that I…I, from this portal of introspection must leave a while to settle my earthly deeds, bake bread for my old neighbor, knock on my heart-broken friend's door, and finally embrace abiding repose, not now perhaps but someway in His own blessed time. -------------- For Regina Riddle’s Heaven Contest 5/31/2020

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Date: 6/6/2020 1:15:00 PM
Intriguing and lovely--congrats, nette!
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Date: 6/4/2020 4:05:00 AM
This poem is an instant fave for me. Such a soothing picture of the heaven we need. Congratulations on your win Nette :)
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Date: 6/2/2020 10:44:00 PM
Very lovely musings Nette as you are drawn back into daily life from this vision that stays with you every moment. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/2/2020 8:52:00 PM
I so love this, sweet lady. I'm so happy to have read it and given it a high placement. It was so deserving. Much love and congrats and blessings sent your way. Thank you so much for entering, Gina
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Date: 6/2/2020 8:36:00 PM
I think heaven will contain anything we may dream up. This is gorgeous Nette. Congratulations on your podium win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/2/2020 8:04:00 PM
Such an excitingly detailed description... The body doesn't want to let go of Earth, does it? Superb contest entry. See you in the Winner's Circle. ~ gw
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Date: 6/1/2020 10:06:00 PM
Wow, your poem is not a description of what heaven looks like. You have expressed how heaven will feel! This is beautiful, Nette...best of luck in the contest. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 6/1/2020 3:22:00 AM
By our good deeds we are never too far from it Hope you're well Tom
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