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Almost Guilty

Occasionally I cry, Overwhelming joy, Sadness is deprived Seems Surreal I found the real deal, I feel almost guilty Like it's a steal Must have been a saint in a past life, I'll soon be lucky enough to be his wife

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Richard Palmer

Date: 10/6/2012 7:27:00 AM

lovely write of love Sharon,wedding invitation wife to be lol

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/6/2012 7:32:00 AM

thanks for reading my stuff:))

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/3/2012 5:28:00 PM

Your form is Rhyme since most of your lines end in a word which rhymes with a line above surreal/deal/steal & life/wife. You could also [when in doubt use the form category Verse. Welcome to Soup Light & Love

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/3/2012 7:24:00 PM

Thank you:)

Robert Johnson

Date: 10/3/2012 2:21:00 PM

Seems you need a lawyer to seal the deal. Put it all in writing and spin the blissful wheel. Let emotions have their way. And gratitude begin the day.

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/3/2012 4:09:00 PM

Thanks for reading!