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Almost Fall

Cobalt blue roped clouds lie 'pon the sky Reach down and touch the distant trees One lone butterfly flitted by On the cool August's morn's breeze August will soon be ending September will parade upon the scene Life will mellow in the cool beginning That season's change will forthwright bring Unfinished

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/30/2015 2:50:00 PM
I always enjoy the beautiful imagery that you put into your poems, Sara... This is very nice. I would love to read it again when it is finished!
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Date: 8/28/2015 9:07:00 AM
I seen this write posted the other day and knew It would excite me....it certainly has dear poet ! Weeee...g'me g'me some beauty....Autumn, lead me to Winters rugged! Awesome Sara...Can't wait to see the burgundy crimson and gold! Yeeeeha...have a blessed weekend....much love, james..P.S.....pile up dem leaves and throw the grand kids innnnn!
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Date: 8/27/2015 2:06:00 PM
Awe, I want fall to happen already. :) Sara.A delightful poem to read... August, almost over.... Love this.. LINDA
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Date: 8/27/2015 1:07:00 PM
It can stand on its own as it is. It's short but a reader feels what you wish to transmit. Should you still add to it, I will be happy to be back and read it again. hugs!
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Date: 8/27/2015 12:30:00 PM
A nice start, Sara. Looking forward to reading the finished item. My very best regards to you...Cheers! :) john
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