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Alliteration Poem

Date due, destruction Building being blownup Father flipping furious Tramp tries to tamper Delays dangerously diagnosed Short supply sandbags Try tomorrow,Tuesday,

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John Loving Iii

Date: 1/7/2013 5:02:00 PM

Sounds like a disaster area.

John Loving Iii
Date: 1/7/2013 5:05:00 PM

My aliteration went from A to Z.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2013 7:28:00 AM

Interesting Alliteration poem..Sara

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/7/2013 7:32:00 AM

Thanks Sara was a trial run really butt it seems ok after all......Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/7/2013 7:22:00 AM

Nice one girl xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/7/2013 7:31:00 AM

Thanks Mandy. ..Seren

Honestly J.T.

Date: 1/6/2013 11:07:00 PM

i like this poem. indeed it is alliteration - JH

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/7/2013 1:56:00 AM

Thank you for commenting glad you liked it....Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/6/2013 7:40:00 PM

yes i know a little about alliteration, and yes i like what i read here...

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/6/2013 9:13:00 PM

Thanks Harry, for commenting, so i did it near enough right then. That amazes me... Seren

Reggae Magnet

Date: 1/6/2013 6:37:00 PM

Just looked it up and it fits the bill, but the notion of urgency carried in every line, nice write

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/6/2013 6:54:00 PM

Thank you Robert for taking the time to stop amd comment.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/6/2013 10:27:00 AM

I don't know alliteration that well so I can't be of any help except to tell you that I enjoyed reading this great write this afternoon! I thought this poem to be tremendous and it was done very nicely! I think you did this alliteration piece wondrously here with this write, at least that's my opinion, Awesome Work my friend!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/6/2013 6:52:00 PM

Thanks for commenting Russell

David Williams

Date: 1/6/2013 8:31:00 AM

Seren pretty perfect poem...David yep Mrs. Brown hilarious, love it...

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/6/2013 2:08:00 AM

Hello you experienced poetry soupers. I know this isn't a good alliteration, so i want you to suggest the ways of correcting it, this way i will learn. Many Thanks. Seren