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Alliteration For the Planet

Wonderful wonders woven within wild. Titillates theatrical tender thoughts Consistently creation, contrives conservation concerns. Ecology evolves equations, entitling entities essence. Empowering equality, enlarges existence. Life lovingly leases Longevity. Biodiversity braces, blatant brutal balding. Deforestation, destruction devoid due definition. People physically, plundering planet. Prevalently procuring, products proscribed Pilfering practices producing poisonous pollutants. Greenhouse gases generated, generously grievous. Temperate temperature’s tempers tumultuous. Creating Climate changes, causing catastrophes. Planet purges peril predominately. Preached, placid platitudes, politicians podiums paced. loved lives logged listed lost. Lacuna languished, lessons least learnt. Losing Life lingers, listing leeward lazily.

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/11/2014 6:45:00 AM

Sam, this is phenomenal use of alliteration. This is a major feat beacuse you have assembled the words in a very cohesive way that makes sense. I applaud you for putting this together in such a clever way! Congratulations in this achievement!

Sam Raj
Date: 6/11/2014 9:28:00 AM

Thanks. Pandita, Sorry I missed your first msg. I am on three sites so this is a bit tough keeping track. Since I have not come across many alliterations, and since I came across your beautiful write, I asked you to check it out. Keep in touch. :-)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/25/2014 10:39:00 AM

Clever use of alliteration - love this poem - Bravo!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/22/2014 1:45:00 PM

Lovely, expressive poem Sam. Points to awareness of the dangers that our planet faces. // congrats on a merited win. // paul

Sam Raj
Date: 4/22/2014 10:08:00 PM

Dear. Paul Thank you for your lovely complements. Just spare some time and glance at my, ‘Simply thank you’ note. Which is posted

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 4/22/2014 9:29:00 AM

Brilliant Sam... Congratulations on your winning in the contest... Verlena

Sam Raj
Date: 4/22/2014 10:42:00 AM

Dear Verlena Thank you for your lovely complements. Just spare some time and glance at my, ‘Simply thank you’ note. Which is being posted shortly.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/22/2014 1:43:00 AM

Your wonderful winning poem speaks to those concerned about our planet and the futures of our descendants and loved ones. Tomorrow is Earth Day and your poem certainly celebrates that. Congratulations on your win!

Sam Raj
Date: 4/22/2014 2:04:00 AM

Dear Connie Thank you for your lovely complements. Just spare some time and glance at my, ‘Simply thank you’ note. Which is being posted shortly.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/22/2014 1:42:00 AM

Brilliant write and congrats on the win, sam

Sam Raj
Date: 4/22/2014 2:04:00 AM

Dear Dr. Ram Mehta Thank you for your lovely complements. Just spare some time and glance at my, ‘Simply thank you’ note. Which is being posted shortly.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/22/2014 12:39:00 AM

A first class alliteration. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Sam Raj
Date: 4/22/2014 2:03:00 AM

Dear Joyce Thank you for your lovely complements. Just spare some time and glance at my, ‘Simply thank you’ note. Which is being posted shortly.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/21/2014 10:22:00 PM

Congrats Sam on ur great win,,,really a beautiful poem ,,, fine use of words here,,, loved the read !!

Sam Raj
Date: 4/22/2014 2:02:00 AM

Dear Dr. Sharma Thank you for your lovely complements. Just spare some time and glance at my, ‘Simply thank you’ note. Which is being posted shortly.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2014 9:47:00 PM

Hi Sam, you know how I feel about this poem. Thank you so much for considering my poem. Congratulations, AWESOME POEM:) Thank you so much for taking your time and supporting my contest... Always & forever *Linda

Sam Raj
Date: 4/22/2014 2:01:00 AM

Dear Linda Thank you for your lovely complements. Just spare some time and glance at my, ‘Simply thank you’ note. Which is being posted shortly.

Tim Smith

Date: 4/21/2014 8:50:00 PM

What an awesome use of alliteration Sam and congrats on the win

Sam Raj
Date: 4/22/2014 2:01:00 AM

Dear Tim Thank you for your lovely complements. Just spare some time and glance at my, ‘Simply thank you’ note. Which is being posted shortly.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/16/2014 3:51:00 AM

WOW, Sam... I love what you said, on my poem.. More, I love the alliteration form.... WOW! Here you are, answering my questions without knowing, about alliteration. I actually was trying to get schooled today, but the poet I was asking, out here off the internet, was not as helpful. Wow, this is a straight favorite. It flows, perfectly. The first line's my fav.... goodnight... LINDA

Sam Raj
Date: 4/16/2014 10:21:00 PM

Thanks a ton Linda. Coming from you it's a great comp. I did not know any thing about Haiku , Tanaka or Alliteration. I am learning about poems from a sight which is called: youngwriters.com and englishleap.com. Thanks for sharing. Hv fun