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Alliteration -Sleek Steel Ships

Steady and stealth are NASA’s sleek steel ships, their bright brazen tail lights trail baby blue skies as they climb cliffs of rugged cloud banks ~*~

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/9/2013 5:01:00 PM

Congrats on your win Annalise ~A.O

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2013 8:05:00 PM

Annalise, CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome alliteration- poem. Had fun reading all entries. take care~LINDA

Jack Horne

Date: 3/31/2013 3:55:00 PM

I love this one - what wonderful descriptions. Hope you're both having a great Easter x

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/26/2013 11:53:00 AM

Not only is this great alliteration, you have captured the awe and beauty of a NASA launch perfectly...the last two lines are priceless - Tim

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/26/2013 10:44:00 AM

this is amazing poetry Annalise, the visual you have made an art of, wonderful to read this...

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/26/2013 8:09:00 AM

I have been so blown away by NASA's accomplishments! We have become blasé and forget what momentous things are happening in our launches to distant stars! So intriguing... as is your poem! Hugs and much love, Jack xox

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/24/2013 5:22:00 PM

This is a wonderful write Annalise! I enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a special piece, Great Work!!