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Alley Cats

Moon croon's gray mumbles Fevered cats flash and tumble Blessed sleep crumbles ________ NOTES: Rhyming haiku is like blending cultures. The origin of the form carries a particular religious or spiritual component which most American poems I've read seem ignorant of. Asking Google® to "hold-forth" on the subject retrieves the following: "Haiku is not just an art form, but a spiritual discipline, like yoga or Zen Buddhist meditation. In its highest realization, haiku is a poem of extraordinary aesthetic and spiritual beauty that captures a profound and balanced moment of insight, resolution and order." Dear reader: I hope I've ruined it for you. Yours truly; Lingua Looms

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Date: 10/23/2023 5:28:00 PM
Back at this one about cool cats
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Date: 7/9/2023 4:01:00 PM
oh this is super cool, Robert!
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Robert Warlov
Date: 7/15/2023 3:53:00 AM
You're such a sweetheart! Thanks so much.
Date: 6/7/2023 11:15:00 PM
I rewrote this employing the "K.I.S.S." principle; economy being an inexorable tenant of nature, and because I'm a smart ass ( epic apocryphal ) ;-)
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