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All Work and No Play

I’d think about Work without Play - And doubt my mind… For Nancy’s If I didn't think what I think, here's what I'd think contest

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Date: 8/26/2012 7:54:00 PM
Good one and I bet you at least will do well in her contest!
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Date: 8/26/2012 5:22:00 PM
Hi Jack, this form is hopeless for me, not sure why, but I think you nailed it, awesome and best of luck in the contest. I am slowly recovering but gosh, good and bad days, ups and downs, still not working, will I ever be able to agai?, not sure anyways you are always in my thoughts and prayers. Love Constance
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Date: 8/26/2012 5:19:00 PM
Jack, i like your entry,, good luck in the contest...always~PD
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Date: 8/26/2012 3:02:00 PM
Strong message in this than bauk, Jack...Why I think even Dr. Ram would like this one! This form is one of my weaknesses! :) Thanks for stopping by! ps..any word from the project?...curious. gwendolen
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Date: 8/26/2012 1:32:00 PM
Good one, Jack..Winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/26/2012 1:26:00 PM
Yes, I surely would doubt my mind with that one my friend! This is a fabulous entry into Nancy's contest! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/26/2012 12:10:00 PM
A grat peom for Nancy. I have no idea what to write.
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Date: 8/26/2012 12:00:00 PM
I'll think about it ..xx
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