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All That Is Left

Breath may escape me Bodily strength evade me All that will last Is my soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/11/2015 1:25:00 PM
Very nice. I note assonance. It's almost a haiku. Eternal and brief. The body is just a cocoon for the butterfly soul.
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