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All So Real

The sun rising up The nature starts stirring No need to turn around when you can feel The harsh reality snaps your mind awake As from dream world, the lost wallet, bangs you down The bright light no more matters as the worldly worry makes you loose all the fun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/10/2015 1:22:00 PM
Excellent poem. Congratulations in your win.
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 10/10/2015 3:22:00 PM
Thanks for your encouragement
Date: 8/19/2015 8:49:00 PM
congrats for your win in the sun contest.
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 8/19/2015 9:19:00 PM
Thanks dear
Date: 8/17/2015 11:16:00 PM
Samiha. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 8/18/2015 12:37:00 AM
Thanks, actually the result got me by surprise. Continue with brain teasers like this. Stay in touch

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