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All Smiles and Frowns

Smile A design from clouds That covers a soft red sky At perfect sunset Frown This sky turning grey From darker invasive clouds At tearful midday
Entrant into Michael J. Falotico's "What Makes You Smile, What Makes You Frown" contest 8/17/2012

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/6/2012 3:07:00 PM
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Way to GO, Russell. Big congrats for your big win.
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:36:00 PM
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Russell, my smile come with a frown at the end... , congratulations, with your senryu in Michael's "Smiles & Frown" contest.. God Bless~PD
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 9/5/2012 5:19:00 AM
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Congratulations on the super win in Michael's contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Lee Ramage
Date: 9/3/2012 5:40:00 PM
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Great poem Russell, congratulations on your win 1st place!! Lee
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Gwendolen Song
Date: 9/3/2012 1:28:00 PM
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So, after the tears then the sky turned back to a smile, right?...Hey Russell, congrats on painting a great image for this contest...Great work from your talented pen!!! gwendolen
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Joann Grisetti
Date: 9/3/2012 9:42:00 AM
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I am so glad to see you at first place. Love you haiku.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 9/3/2012 9:38:00 AM
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YEAH! Russ number 1!! couldn't happen to a sweeter man. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Delysia Hendricks
Date: 9/3/2012 9:34:00 AM
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Indeed a worthy first placement. Good work and congratulations, Russell. :)
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 9/3/2012 8:55:00 AM
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congrats Russell on a most amazing win for first place with this precious poem of superb analogy and soft imagery luv ..
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/3/2012 6:49:00 AM
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Congratulations once again Russell, well done xx
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Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/3/2012 6:46:00 AM
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congratulations! good one
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/3/2012 6:41:00 AM
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Congrats Russell on claiming 1st Place!!! Excellent my friend,.. MJF
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/18/2012 12:21:00 PM
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I love how you involved nature in this challenge. I did mine totally differently and not as well!
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Robert Pettit
Date: 8/17/2012 9:00:00 PM
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A couple of very descriptive senryu entries. Both are a delight to read.
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