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All Screwed Up

All Screwed Up I am all screwed up in the head.. Dangerous emotions; thoughts misled. My will to live has died.. Trials and tribulations coincide.. Heart bleeds, the throes of battle. Last breath, turmoil blameful. Alone and lost in this present domain.. Can't escape the past to which I am chained.. Living a lie, tear stained face.. Feeling dejected, out of place.. Harsh words, degrading submission.. Soul depleted, now a vixen.

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Adeleke Adeite

Date: 8/16/2009 7:27:00 AM

This is an excellent, wonderful piece, you are a wonderful poet I love the flow of words… please keep the flag flying and congratulations on a well deserved feature of the week. You are great friend!. Adeleke

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/14/2009 1:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

James Fraser

Date: 8/11/2009 1:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James

Diane Christian

Date: 8/11/2009 3:39:00 AM

a great write, congratulations on your featured poem God bless you from diane

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/10/2009 5:28:00 AM

Erin - I wish to congratulate you on having your poetry featured this week – God bless you, MJ

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2009 4:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Erin. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/9/2009 12:30:00 PM

Congratulations on being featured, Erin. There is hope. And chains can be broken with God's help. Feel better, friend. Keep writing! DAS-J

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/9/2009 11:20:00 AM

congrats on being feature.

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/9/2009 9:42:00 AM

Erin I really don't see you as any vixen - btw what exactly is a vixen - Isn't that one of the reindeer - Just kidding - Congrats on being featured this week, MJ

Michael Torres

Date: 10/30/2008 3:21:00 PM

Well done Erin and very deserving.My choice would have put you at the top. God bless you Michael Torres

Cayetano Young

Date: 9/22/2008 9:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win on Charles Fuller's contest. Well done! warm regards, Gino

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/22/2008 4:43:00 PM

Congratulations Erin on your win in Charles Fuller's contest! Well done! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/9/2008 12:33:00 PM

Sharing grief and disappointment helps to heal. I think we all do a little of that on this website, and it really does release some of the anger and pain. Keep writing, and keep on..going on..one day at a time! Sincerely, Carrie

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/9/2008 10:17:00 AM

wow.hopefully this site will provide the outlet to release some of that tention life sometimes offer.It is a test of our strength from the lord.I too, sometimes feel this way and need to reach rather thrue prayer or poetry. BOTH WRITE ON