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All Over Again

Lonely tear stains A naked heart is drenched by a torrent summer rain Promises poured down the drain How does one ever get use to such intense emotional pain Harsh words exchanged Why did you both resort to calling each other names Assigning the blame No one ever feels that they're guilty, just cause invoked sharpens the aim Love loss is freedom gained Counting the cost lets you know that the grass ain't always as green as it claim Molten desires will change Time will temper the exasperation, in the future you won't be the same Begin all over again Take another underground trip on the night journey to love; moving through the darkness, searching for the light at the end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/23/2016 9:09:00 AM
Hi Freddie, You've penned some wise words. The last three lines is good advice. Well done. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/24/2016 8:48:00 AM
Ty, Alexis. You shower me w/so much love, but I love it though. Love your support. May you and your family have a blessed Christmas and New Year. Love always to you.
Date: 12/20/2016 7:42:00 PM
Your awesome dramatic verse reminds me of that Eagles song, "Already Gone." P & L~Che
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/24/2016 8:42:00 AM
Ty, Cheryl. Hmmm. Don't know that song, gotta check it out. Have a beautiful Christmas and New Year. Love and joy to you.
Date: 12/20/2016 6:20:00 PM
I do love the first 3 lines, so much to ponder on. An excellent way to share your words....Linda
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/24/2016 8:50:00 AM
Oops. Can't forget to bid you a fond adieu. Many blessings of love to you, PD.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/24/2016 8:46:00 AM
Ty, PD. Glad you liked it, dear. That line about counting the cost ... the grass ain't always as green as it claim ... is my veiled jab at those who end relationships for financial considerations. They put money above hurting someone's feelings. Ty for the continued love and support, Linda. May you and your family have a blessed Christmas and New Year.
Date: 12/20/2016 5:55:00 PM
Well done Freddie! So true how things can happen.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/24/2016 8:39:00 AM
Ty, Heidi. That's the way life goes sometimes. Have a wonderful Christmas and New Year. Love always to you and yours.
Date: 12/20/2016 3:43:00 PM
Great one, Freddie! I love the fact that 'No one ever feels that they're guilty'...
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/24/2016 8:37:00 AM
Ty, Adeniji. Love the love and support. Have a blessed Christmas and New Year. Much love to you and yours.

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