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"all Our's" Part1&4

The curtains drawn, the doors are locked now we are alone.. The lights are out your heart is starting to race now come close to me.. Fanning the Embers~ contest by Catie Lindsey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/10/2012 8:52:00 PM
you are to sweet and romantic...pd
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Date: 9/3/2010 12:03:00 PM
Hot and anticipative ...
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Date: 9/2/2010 9:29:00 PM
the suspense is killing me, Michael, enjoyed this Senryu, Harry
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Date: 9/2/2010 7:07:00 AM
Woo hoo, finally! lol, just kidding.. Awesome senryu Michael , luv Wilma
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:52:00 AM
An almost geometric scene is drawn with you precise senryu Michael. An excellent form implication and sense of order. Great little senryu Michael. tom
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Date: 9/1/2010 7:37:00 PM
Make sure you are alone, How about the back door and windows> Michael, hahaha
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Date: 9/1/2010 6:57:00 PM
OOOOOOOOOOOO! Michael, cozy romantic and all that good loving passion. A senryu full of hot burning desires behind closed doors,..LA
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Date: 9/1/2010 6:09:00 PM
Well... don't leave us hanging, Michael. What happens next?? LOL Enjoyed your romantic senryu, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/1/2010 4:43:00 PM
Sounds like a plan Michael.. and Ron and I are in Ocean City Maryland for a week of fun in the sun before heading home to the REAL world now.. enjoyed .. this beach is 'all ours' right now.. luv..
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Date: 9/1/2010 4:13:00 PM
Quiet time at home reads like a peaceful and comfortable place..Sara
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