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All of Me - All of You: a Realist's View

Giving oneself over completely to another. . . . Yes, it can be done. Two embracing underneath the sea is romantic, two becoming one! But to focus everything on you, giving myself over completely: Is it even feasible to do? Life requires much more of you and me. Marriage isn’t one long fantasy. I am glad for just half of your all. Giving yourself over completely means to ME, you don’t put up a wall! We have our own work and interests, Dear. All things to everyone we can’t be. Yet know when you need me, I'll be here. . . giving myself over completely. (I really enjoy the John Legend song All of Me. However, this is what I was prompted to write after really thinking it over and looking at another facet of what the song's lyrics could mean.)

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Casarah Nance

Date: 6/26/2014 7:29:00 PM

That is a realistic view. marriage isn't one long fantasy, but that is why we write poetry on the side.. :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/12/2014 3:21:00 PM

Your words are so true. Trying to get one month read as I am so behind on my comments to everyone. love phyl

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/3/2014 8:13:00 AM

Now this is real! You can't properly take care of the one you love if you don't take care of yourself too.

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/2/2014 1:31:00 PM

Beautiful is that "Life requires much more of you and me" and "I am glad for just half of your all". Lovely love poem, enjoyed. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 4/2/2014 12:24:00 PM

Love the realistic approach you took on this one Andrea.....great write! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/1/2014 7:37:00 AM

I think when we give all of our selves to the present moment that is a remarkable thing. Those are the times we truly see our partners, our friends and the new people we are blessed to be in contact with. I enjoyed your poem Andrea.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/31/2014 2:47:00 PM

Love this thought provoking and realistic write, Andrea

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/31/2014 1:05:00 PM

Hi Andrea; Nice poem, I think that when people are in love - that's what we do, but one always gives more than the other. My brother says that the one that loves more will always give more. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/31/2014 12:37:00 PM

When it's love, it's from above and degrees don't really matter. Loneliness or togetherness, I'll always take the latter.

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 3/30/2014 5:45:00 PM

I love this, Andrea. You did a good job. It's very well thought out. I enjoyed it :)

Richard Ferry

Date: 3/30/2014 3:35:00 PM

definitely one of my favorite people ....nice write....

Darren Watson

Date: 3/30/2014 12:13:00 PM

Romance is a beautiful thing but so is trust. You are absolutely right , We do have our own interests but we have to trust that those interests don't include playing away . Unfounded allegations destroy relationships .

Darren Watson
Date: 3/30/2014 12:15:00 PM

I would keep date nights and all that blanket on the ground stuff but organised nookie nights , What's that all about ?

Tim Smith

Date: 3/30/2014 10:34:00 AM

What a nice simple take on one of life's toughest challenges. Thank you for my placement in your contest.....Hugs Tim

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/30/2014 10:07:00 AM

great one, andrea! I like what you've said and how you've said it!

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/30/2014 9:24:00 AM

Ps.......I was away yesterday, but so pleased to see my "naughty" side appealed to your limerick sense of humor!!! :) What a surprise to see it on top of your list......Thanks so much.......that was fun!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/30/2014 9:22:00 AM

I love the realistic approach you took with your muse, Andrea,...because as we both know, marriage and love isn't going to last on romance alone, but needs the solid foundation of all the things you mention in your poem! Nicely done! (I haven't written one for this.....I'm stumped to find a new way to go !!

John Lawless

Date: 3/30/2014 8:49:00 AM

Another Quatern eh! Stop making it look so easy. The sentiments here are real as marriage IMHO is not leaning on one another for support but standing together as part of the whole. Nicely written ......Quatern.

Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/30/2014 2:33:00 AM

All of me - All of you. Well conversations between I and You ...Divine love, worship, Devotion ! I enjoyed it...Best wishes from my soul...

Michael Dom

Date: 3/29/2014 11:07:00 PM

Andrea, I enjoyed the view too. Cheers!

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/29/2014 9:22:00 PM

You have placed an excellent seed into my head and enabled it to grow by the grandeur of your words! I surely loved reading this enlightening poem here this evening! You have delighted me by the splendor of your incredible write my friend! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!

James Peranteau

Date: 3/29/2014 8:57:00 PM

I love the thought which you have replanted in those of us who almost forgot this truth dear poet ! TY Andrea, a truly classic feeling ! Have a blessed weekend my friend....much love, james