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All My Love

I am the hand drawn to his lips, the whisper in his ear. I am the sway in his smooth hips, his first and only tear. I am his gold in memories, the song he hears in sleep. I am the dream he longs to free, a loving thought to keep. I am his rising light of day, his warmth on winter’s night. I am clouds parting when he prays, his shield from pain and fright. If I am these and never more, with my last breath, I shall rejoice. To know, content, my heart beat for love’s words held deep beneath his voice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/27/2017 1:13:00 AM
I simply love this poem.
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Date: 7/19/2015 8:37:00 PM
Simply superb romantic writing. A truer pleasure to read and ponder on. A7 my friend!
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Date: 7/18/2015 7:05:00 PM
This is so preciously delivered, each word, line and rhyme arranged just so on carefully placed velvet pillows. I tread so lightly here as not to disturb the image, grace and flow. Just excellent work.
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Date: 7/9/2015 11:25:00 PM
So melodic and sweet, Rhonda. :) Such a treat to read this piece from you. You have such a lovely way with words. Hugs, dear.
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Date: 7/8/2015 8:21:00 AM
So languidly lovely yet passionate in its sincerity. This is your style, Rhonda. Sweet, softly romantic. 7 and to the favs! hugs
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Date: 7/8/2015 6:11:00 AM
This poem is a beautifully written poem that simply sparkles with romance Rhonda. I am fav'ing it! I just love the way it is worded. 7
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Date: 7/7/2015 5:05:00 AM
I am, yes you are a wonderful poet also...love your sincerity it shines through in ever word..
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Date: 7/6/2015 9:33:00 PM
A lovely, romantic write, Rhonda! I really like this! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/6/2015 3:18:00 PM
this is so beautifully romantic, Rhonda. I just love it!
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Date: 7/6/2015 3:17:00 PM
Hello Rhonda!! Most excellent and most beautiful. One can certainly sense the passion and emotion of this romantic piece. A most definite "7"!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:41:00 PM
Such a stellar, romantic write, Rhonda. Loved it (as usual!) A 7 :)
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Date: 7/6/2015 10:30:00 AM
a passionate write my friend, could only come from a heart that's full.
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Date: 7/6/2015 10:23:00 AM
WOW!!!!! your descriptive take the attention of the readers, your words speak eloquently..........A.M
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Date: 7/6/2015 8:23:00 AM
Rhonda, your write is passionate, seductive, meaningful, a brilliant 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13
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Date: 7/6/2015 5:29:00 AM
such a tender romantic poem Rhonda:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Date: 7/6/2015 3:22:00 AM
how warm and lovely is this melody, rhonda... so soothing on a rainy day here!.. huggs
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