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All Jumbled

I've lost my mojo Can't think Can't write I was better when solo Can't be depressing Wow, Fiona Apple isn't even helping What is wrong with me? Grinning like a Cheshire cat Makes me want to smack Myself Help! I'm losing it! Gotta put Adele on my playlist Maybe that will help me ignore The person I'm falling for

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/15/2013 7:13:00 AM

They say love is a form of insanity. Who knew the insane could be so happy! Good luck, I hope he treats you well.

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/15/2013 9:54:00 AM

Hahaha! It sure is!!! Ah, he's one of those people treats everyone kind. :D So insanely happy! ;)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/14/2013 9:57:00 AM

soup mail.

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/14/2013 10:31:00 AM

Yayyy! lol!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2013 10:47:00 PM

I LIKES this jumbled poem!!!

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/14/2013 8:33:00 AM

Hahaha thank you!!!! :D

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2013 8:50:00 PM

Caleah, yes,,, add the good sounding song to your playlist... right now is not the time to fall in love... JK... girl you can't stop love, music makes it easy to entrap yourself with more thoughts over the guy your falling for... a cute poem....Linda

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/14/2013 8:34:00 AM

LOL!! I'm trying, I'm trying!! Hahaha! Grr, it's hard feeling this way and yet I'm loving it...it's crazy and weird and good just the way love should be. :D Thank you!! :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/13/2013 6:34:00 PM

Timothy's comment is awesome...I will agree..I love how open you were with this write. Enjoyed!!! :)

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/14/2013 8:35:00 AM

Thanks! I wasn't sure how it would be received since it was...well...JUMBLED! Ha!! Thanks so much! :D

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/13/2013 2:12:00 PM

I see you're very conflicted at the moment! A person once told me, on a different forum site that "You write the most genuine love pieces when you're not in a relationship with anyone... cause when you ARE in a relationship it takes up too much of your writing time". I'm not gonna agree or disagree, but what he said did make me think. Loved the way you expressed yourself in this... brilliant!

Caleah Buil
Date: 5/14/2013 8:32:00 AM

Haha! That is SO TRUE! I do write better about love when I'm usually NOT. Hahaha, gonna avoid falling so that your writing will still be good? (Joke!!) Hopefully, I'll be able to delve back in my writing soon, cause all I'm seeing is sunshine and rainbows, lol! Thanks so much for your comment!!! :D