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“Remembering when” I looked into “The eye of the beast” Not “10 minutes to decide” just a few seconds at least “My very first time” alone with you in the meadow Whether “Dreams or reality” we had to go “I never thought it would be like this” I expected a walk a sweet tender kiss “We didn’t listen” to the warnings around It was like “A ripple In time” love did abound “Our heart” was beating, it is as one Then the time came I thought you were gone “What is love” this feeling “It Hurts” so I knew then I wouldn’t let you to go. “A flame once burned” I would not let it die Not the passing so quick as “The coma butterfly” Never did I want to have “Empty arms” I knew you were mine with all of your charms. “I paid the toll” in my mind was the thought My fingers flicked the number for the help that I sought Then the sweetest words ever and this I can tell When you did look up and ask Are you an Angel? © 25/08/2013 GG It was going to be in the contest but I see I am too late.

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Date: 8/29/2013 4:33:00 PM
love this girl, wonderful how titles can flow, and makes awesome poetry, pity about the contest,
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Date: 8/26/2013 1:08:00 PM
beautiful write Mandy...very nice ending...best wishes
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Date: 8/26/2013 11:04:00 AM
a wonderful poem...Linda
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Date: 8/25/2013 3:30:00 PM
This is awesome....sorry to hear it was late for the contest! Hugs
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