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All In a Days Win

Drifting as the snow topped alps Town to Town State to state Nothing of warmth in sight Becoming presents itself In the mist of the cry Acting as if is Not enough Becoming a part Assures survival A thing can not be against it self It can only turn Making relief --

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/10/2012 12:38:00 PM
I love this poem Vennie. Why not enter this poem in Yasmin's Snow Competition. -Mohammad
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Vennie Burns
Date: 3/16/2012 9:47:00 AM
Mohammad you are too kind... Thanks so much!
Date: 3/10/2012 9:07:00 AM
Very nice poetry.... Michael
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Vennie Burns
Date: 3/16/2012 9:49:00 AM
Thank you for your comment it gives inward smiles.

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