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All In a Day

A black cloud dangles Effortlessly forms A haunting image Showers travel east Daisy hides her face. A Robin sings A melody The sun appears Once more she smiles. Grass uncoils Raindrops dry Web retracts. Sunset Moon beam. Stars. © Harry J Horsman 2022

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Ann Peck

Date: 8/18/2022 1:45:00 PM

Harry, This is so beautiful! I'm faving.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/22/2022 7:38:00 AM

Beautiful imagery Harry. Congratulations on your win! Linda

Eve Roper

Date: 7/13/2022 2:07:00 PM

Back again with a big congratulations, Harry, to a beautiful well deserved win. Blessings my friend

John Watt

Date: 7/12/2022 9:55:00 PM

Harry, you have compressed a day's worth of nature's sights and sounds into this little gem. Congrats for your #1 win ~ John

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/12/2022 5:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful first place win Harry. Blessings xxoo

Valsa George

Date: 7/11/2022 9:43:00 PM

Once again Congratulations harry on your first place win in Caren's contest !

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/11/2022 1:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Harry. I can see the picture you create with the limited syllables. I especially like "grass uncoils," "raindrops dry," "web retracts." Truly nature is never static! Congratulations on your win! Blessings!

Michael Tor

Date: 7/4/2022 12:58:00 AM

Harry I missed this one. Congratulations my friend sorry Im late just noticed...

Silpika Kalita

Date: 7/3/2022 12:13:00 PM

Picturesque and artistic hexaverse Harry, congratulations on POTD.. Silpika

Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/28/2022 4:39:00 AM

Very nicely penned Big Congrats. Blessings

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2022 1:41:00 PM

a POTD. Congrats. I knew this was special.

James Fraser

Date: 6/26/2022 2:39:00 AM

Many poems I've read on PS how I'd loved to have them read to me whilst my eyes are closed, and this in certainly one of them, for it throws up instant images, nice one Harry :)

Sally Eslinger

Date: 6/25/2022 10:59:00 PM

I really enjoyed this poem.Made the ordinaryquite extraordinary! Bravo!

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/25/2022 4:06:00 AM

Harry, belated congratulations on your POTD honors! Our world is amazing and you definitely captured its glory "all in a day"!!

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/24/2022 1:31:00 PM

Huge congratulations on this image filled feast my friend. Every verse a perfect fit to lead to wonderfully wrought creation. A JEWEL AND A FINE FAV TOO. God bless,,

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/24/2022 9:48:00 AM

Wow Harry, your imagery excels in this wonderful choice for POTD! A belated congratulations on have this honored. I loved it! Blessings xxoo

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/24/2022 3:51:00 AM

A day's journey, the resplendence of a lifetime well spent for learned the meaning and trust. Love it, Harry. Great write! "A Robin sings A melody The sun appears Once more she smiles." A reassuring image -- one to take with us every day.

Valsa George

Date: 6/24/2022 1:45:00 AM

Back to your poem to congratulate you on your POTD

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/23/2022 11:52:00 PM

A beautiful painting of nature in very sparing words. Portrays a vast beautiful vista. Congratulations!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/23/2022 10:58:00 PM

Congratulations for This POTD. Great poem.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/23/2022 10:16:00 PM

Great Diminished Hexaverse , Harry, congratulations on POTD. Blessing's friend

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/23/2022 8:41:00 PM

such vivid imagery as once more she smiles. Congrats on your POTD

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 6/23/2022 7:32:00 PM

This is beautiful and well deserving of POTD. Congrats Harry!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/23/2022 6:23:00 PM

My favorite time of *day* is actually when evening falls. A combination of the "Sunset" and the "Stars". So dreamy and romantic indeed. Of course I enjoy a low dangling cloud, with rain to soothe me. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. Congratulations Harry, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

David Mchattie

Date: 6/23/2022 6:12:00 PM

Wonderful poem my friend. I've been trying to write one for Karen's contest... its just not coming together. Its a tough concept for me. Have a great day.