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All I Could Do Was Surrender

An ethereal essence suspended sublime; A most beautiful image never to be mine. A reluctant suitor in the heat of God's time, Clinging to a shadow made of my own design. I had searched my life for a face in the crowds, and Been scorned and rebuked on every occasion. Some say our destinies are foreordained - preplanned; I prayed somehow I could write my own equation. Yet, when I came to that final moment I saw That fate would have taken me to a loftier plane. My reality offered no time to withdraw; I could do naught but surrender my heart and my brain. My search is not over, I've envisioned her face; Surrendering to love and the one I'll embrace. August 1, 2016

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Date: 8/6/2016 11:30:00 AM
This is awesome and fantastic. I love it in every way. Lovely, lovely, so lovely.
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Date: 8/2/2016 5:52:00 AM
Very well written Sonnet ... I liked it ...
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