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All I Can Do

Fear fills your empty eyes as thoughts contort your face. It is hard to believe that you forgot your name. And as you shrink inside, all I can do is weep. Your identity's gone, only a shell remains. And stripped of dignity, you struggle with your shame. And yet, despite your pain, all I can do is weep. Lost in a mental maze, you can't find your way out. And confusion stalks you within your memories. And though I'm losing you, all I can do is weep. Dwindling into fragments, you die a bit each day. And your hours are endured silently in despair. And yet, with Alzheimer's, all I can do is weep. (Blank Verse) 3/28/2015

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Date: 3/8/2018 10:14:00 AM
Emile, love all the compassion and the exquisite form. The repetition of the "yet..." followed by the last last of every stanza "all I can do is weep". A most definite FAVE and a WOW.
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Date: 3/8/2018 11:04:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate both your comments and your support. Emile.
Date: 3/29/2015 9:21:00 AM
Masterful and sensitive write, Emile. The reader feels the moment of despair. Well deserved 7. Hugs! Kim
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Date: 3/29/2015 12:39:00 PM
Thanks again Kim, I'm in your debt. Emile.
Date: 3/29/2015 7:57:00 AM
such a powerful & heart felt piece here
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Date: 3/29/2015 9:13:00 AM
Thanks Jack, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 3/29/2015 2:53:00 AM
Very authentic write. I respect!!
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Date: 3/29/2015 9:13:00 AM
Thanks Njeri, I appreciate your continued support. Emile.
Date: 3/28/2015 1:12:00 PM
Emile, your poem truly captures the cruel reality of Alzheimer's disease, so well written, a perfect 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, entwined . . .
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Date: 3/28/2015 3:13:00 PM
Thanks so much, your visits are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 3/28/2015 12:03:00 PM
Very nicely written.
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Date: 3/28/2015 12:11:00 PM
Thank you, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 3/28/2015 10:33:00 AM
The disease is such a tragedy and it drags many families and loved one's down a horrific journey to an unfortunate end. A very well crafted piece on a hard subject...Tim
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Date: 3/28/2015 11:17:00 AM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate the support. Emile.

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