All Hallows' Eve

i hear the whispers softly veiled in evening mist.. moonlight moves - this night 13 Oct 2017

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/8/2021 9:48:00 PM

lovely, David ~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/28/2017 7:08:00 PM

mellow, mellow with the finest of lines, david.. huggs

Paul Callus

Date: 10/26/2017 10:16:00 AM

The first two lines prepare the setting for this eerie senryu, David; the end line, a fitting climax. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

James Inman

Date: 10/24/2017 7:30:00 AM

I like this very much. I seems to be setting up a long ghost story. Nicely done David.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2017 7:16:00 AM

Love the last line! Congrats! <3 Kim

Lu Loo

Date: 10/24/2017 5:38:00 AM

it's creepy when you hear those whispers! great senyru dear David! thank you and congrats :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2017 3:35:00 PM

David, this one is REALLY good. For me , one of the best! Congrats to you.

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/23/2017 11:00:00 AM

Terrific work David, congratulations...

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/23/2017 7:27:00 AM

Gorgeous :) congratulations! xomo