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All But Few

The aggress surrenders But death lingers Impeded by damned souls Clutching to their final breath The flailing limbs Now lethargic Severed, scattered Men languished Not by will, but war A storm of clouded judgement Summoned by the tyrannic gods of war With cryptic intent But greedily akin Riddled beyond sin A relentless hail of gore An ocean for pawns to drown in And the kings with battleships To rule absolutely Remorseless beyond doubt Or second thoughts Behold the mighty catharsis Cleansing of the weak armed, The weak willed, The weak minded, Blindly follow the call In hopes of glory Or in a mindless delusion of good will Hopes and dreams gone amiss A lingering kiss From those who care Does he dare To kiss back? Was he not already dead The moment they lied to him? What good is living free, Without a life to lead? Freedom from this cursed realm Full of pain and grievance Is that what they spoke of? Freedom of a kind But not near as welcome as the other All but few, cease to live Those who yearn to live The man who cherish thy loved ones And hold them close Need not be sad nor morose And they be not cowards For the braver man fights his anger And sees from other eyes Unbeknownst to him He listens to reason Not accuse brothers of treason Or cowardice for doing what is true Would you? For a wise man once said “No”, and lost his head

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Date: 12/8/2013 10:08:00 AM
beautifully penned
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Date: 11/28/2013 10:14:00 AM
Welcome Destin to Ps, I am impressed by the art and great skill you put on this one, Hope to follow on more of your poems, for this its a master piece...Welcome to a family that will cherish and treasure your every effort..Rodgers Roger
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Date: 11/20/2013 3:17:00 PM
Hi Destin, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/20/2013 3:28:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Destin ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2013 2:36:00 AM
wow, deep & epic, Desitin, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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