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All Angels Weep

United angelic sons rent in two, One side rebellious, the other true. The heavenly holy bright angels weep, Witnessing hate and violence and grief. The devious and loathsome dark angels weep witnessing devotion of honest sheep. The evil spirit realm influencing world leaders Use all types of media, religions, and speakers. My devastated heart is shredded and sighs seeing all of us trapped and tormented inside. Turmoil we suffer, regardless of our stance till weeping will soon be a thing of the past. With lightening speed our Savior will appear, And repair the damage and dry all our tears! May 3, 2016

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Date: 2/5/2017 11:57:00 AM
Hopeful and inspiring Thanks!
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Date: 5/13/2016 9:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Susan Palli
Date: 5/15/2016 11:34:00 AM
Thanks, BL! Have a nice day.
Date: 5/13/2016 11:03:00 AM
Susan, thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Susan Palli
Date: 5/13/2016 11:37:00 AM
Thank you so much for the contest and placing my poem, Luloo!
Date: 5/7/2016 6:27:00 AM
It's rare that I see dark angels addressed, I appreciate that, as well as the ending when tears shall be no more. Great write!
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Susan Palli
Date: 5/10/2016 11:38:00 AM
Thank you for your nice words, Dineen.
Date: 5/5/2016 11:15:00 AM
Great imagery and fine insightful thought displayed here Susan, blessings, Gordon PS: thanks for soupmail, will answer in a few days, been busy.
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Susan Palli
Date: 5/6/2016 1:26:00 AM
Thank you Gordon!
Date: 5/3/2016 3:39:00 PM
excellent ending on this one. One day there will be no more weeping on this earth for all will be judged and life as we know it will be all changed. It was interesting that you had bad AND good angels shown in this little poem, Susan.
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Susan Palli
Date: 5/6/2016 1:25:00 AM
Thank you Andrea! I appreciate the encouragement!
Date: 5/3/2016 8:16:00 AM
Susan, this is a great write for the contest, those dark angels weeping is a nice touch, I am loving this 7 ~
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Susan Palli
Date: 5/3/2016 1:07:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 5/3/2016 8:01:00 AM
Nice Susan, let's keep those dark angels weeping, good witness, thanks John
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Susan Palli
Date: 5/3/2016 1:05:00 PM
Thank you, John!
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Susan Palli
Date: 5/3/2016 1:04:00 PM
Thank you, John!

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