All About Love

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Restfulness breathes love Heart and pulse pulsates like stars Aglow With serenity. Love lets you listen You'll reach out and touch someone Cause Love in action rules. Love wait and look deep A treasured thing breathes passion And Inspires more love. Love is boundless sea A reservoir vast and free Yet Ebbing and flowing. Love is rain and pain Sunshine and moon glow it brings So Together we bloom. Love is light measure heavy dark clouds roll on by So You feel energized. Love's portion is treat Sugar blues is way too sweet So Guard your appetite. Love is light and life It will never weigh you down No It won't make you frown. Love will wake you up Invite you on its journey With Light measure of weight. *

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Fiona Callaghan

Date: 4/22/2016 10:26:00 AM

I really enjoyed your wonderful poem Iris. Fiona

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 4/2/2016 10:25:00 AM

Very nice Iris...I do love the love poems...love to read them almost as much as I love to write them LOL! Good job here...! MC

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/3/2016 5:37:00 PM

Marquis, little creatures of earth, seasons, for example; they're the stuff of haiku, yes.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/20/2016 2:05:00 AM

I'm not in Georgia, yet. Plan to be leaving around April 24th or so ... I'm moving into an RV, so it's a lot of downsizing with many things to sell (yard-sales and more yard-sales! ... ha ha) ...

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/20/2016 6:16:00 PM

So look at the end results; listen to music as you work.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/20/2016 2:03:00 AM

These are gorgeous, Iris. You turned these haiku into more of a beautiful ode to what love is. "Love's portion is treat. Sugar blues are way too sweet so guard your appetite." Too much all at once and you won't notice it ... in small bites, it was taste sweet all over again. You've really blossomed here, in making me reflect ... love is only overbearing when we make it complicated. Keep it simple! That's what I get out our your last haiku.

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/20/2016 6:18:00 PM

"Love is only overbearing when we make it complicated." I love that thought.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/19/2016 8:55:00 AM

- Yes, lovely written Iris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/19/2016 5:59:00 PM

Hi Anne, toyed around after reading "Five Love Languages" and came up with those.

Red Fiery

Date: 3/18/2016 11:58:00 PM

Love is I indeed the best feeling ever...I enjoyed this brilliant work this morning and it brought smile to my face...7/7

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/19/2016 6:01:00 PM

Thank you my dear. C "Five Love Languages" those came to mind after reading Dr. Chapman's little purple book.