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Alive Until Dead

Can life whisper louder the past life ive left far behind? Not even a question I need answered, that's standing in line... Like a constant radio playing iin my head, it sings of all things instead I should've said.. Or maybe never telling you all that went thru my mind Things probably left better unsaid or with time.. .What was hidden In my head. every feeling felt every fear I thought then dead. The fear is now alive wreaking havoc in my head Its ok tho I live until Im dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/5/2016 10:37:00 PM
I think you show a lot of potential...
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Date: 7/16/2016 12:26:00 AM
Kelsey, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/13/2016 10:27:00 PM
Kelsey, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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