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Alive and Fighting

~Alive and Fighting~ Dreaming Screaming Fighting Writing Dreaming in a world of dark writing. Words screaming alive and still fighting. For Dr. Rams Tyburn Contest....

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/23/2011 9:22:00 PM

Love the way you twist those words into a great verse Michael. Hope you win with this one.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 8/23/2011 10:25:00 AM

I like this, Michael. A lot! The two last lines showed efforts of unwritten idea.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2011 9:55:00 AM

HI, Michael. I enjoyed this one. This form is very weird though (too restraining) and I saw that many poets were not doing it correctly from the examples I found online. I think someone needs to teach it in a blog or something!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/23/2011 9:49:00 AM

excellent expressions of the true writer's feelings Michael luv.. good luck in the contest.. this brilliant piece will top the charts luv... your W.K. is showing ..as your J.G. is enjoying it...luv..forever and always..