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Alight In the Dark

the dark side of the sun sunny side up i begin searching in the soul with light from the moon caressing deep dark space twinkling stars shining winking i look upon the moons face smiling silver shadows dancing fluttering light in the trees hiding seek and you will find as night speaks i whisper softly without a voice not lost dreaming something beautiful a lonely wolf upon a mountain top coming out of the shadows howling into night one with his shadow lighting up bright in the dark in the moon face

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Date: 2/17/2014 1:38:00 PM
A lonely wolf howling and on the other side a soft whisper..reflects so much of who we are..At times sad..at times happy..At times lonely..Other times fulfilled..I love the profound message which dwells within each verse Liam.Excellent!
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Date: 9/15/2013 1:37:00 PM
A dreamy piece my friend. I like it.
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Date: 9/12/2013 12:03:00 PM
Wolves are very mysterious and elusive creatures. Yet, we have heard them howling from the woods behind our house nearly every night!...Beautiful and vivid imagery in this poem! Loved it!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/12/2013 1:17:00 PM
kelly thank you ever so much amazing comment appreciated deeply
Date: 9/12/2013 12:01:00 PM
- A beautiful poem Liam! - I like the way you write on, it is easy to understand .... even for me who do not have English as my mother tongue ... and my "school english" is bad .... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/12/2013 1:16:00 PM
thank you anne lise for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 9/12/2013 7:22:00 AM
Very romantic, Liam....sweet. Light and darkness...there is magic and splendor in each side...thanks for your visits... :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/12/2013 1:15:00 PM
eileen thank you kindly for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated

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