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Aliens On Mars

Opportunity and Curiosity Lost their sweet little velocity On a sojourn in space to a volcanicity Mars, the god of war reddened to see two freaks Were they the angels that Zeus had sent to bring life? Or were they aliens to destroy through his smoky red shroud? This astral invasion he knew for sure was by no accident or coincidence! Opportunity with clever robosticity Was the first to alight the lander on the dustycity Curiosity quickened his agility to search for water before Opportunity Mars waters flooded up at these angelic aliens' audacity Dare they to gather his Martian soil and rock with so much of incivility? Study? Research? Photographs? Do aliens wish to build another concretecity? The two rovers researched blissfully in the picturesqueness of a forbiddencity. Opportunity walked back to the spaceship towing Curiosity The Maven took off from man's futuristic home, orbiting the fourth solar planet Before reaching NASA's international space station with its top secret mission. May 11, 2016 For Brian Davey *Opportunity and Curiosity are robots sent by NASA to collect soil and rock to see if human habitation is possible. * Volcanoes on Mars are now extinct *Maven is a lander sent by NASA with the two robots *Mars is the fourth planet closest to Sun *Red dust covers most of Mars

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Date: 5/23/2016 5:17:00 AM
A fine write with interesting facts about recent Martian exploration. Congratulations on your win.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/23/2016 10:56:00 AM
Thanks Robert!
Date: 5/13/2016 3:51:00 AM
Very well written, Balveen, and a most well deserved placing. I loved your use of the various robot probes and Maven. Concrete city - nice word coined there. Congrats on this fine poem and win! ~karam~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/13/2016 5:50:00 AM
Thanks for the overwhelming compliments, Karam!
Date: 5/13/2016 2:34:00 AM
Balveen, congrats on your "Life On Mars" Win...LINDA
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/13/2016 5:51:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 5/12/2016 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations,well written!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/12/2016 2:20:00 PM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 5/12/2016 9:58:00 AM
Balveen, what a wonderful poem! I love the way you addressed the Mars theme! Congratulations on your well-deserved 2nd Place podium win! 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/12/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 5/12/2016 6:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/12/2016 7:19:00 AM
Thanks Joseph!
Date: 5/12/2016 2:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your finish in my contest! I love the way you wove Opportunity and Curiosity into this write! Thank you so much for entering
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/12/2016 4:18:00 AM
Brian, thank you so much! I'm glad you appreciated my poem!

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