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Two martians they landed on earth Most earthlings gave them a wide berth A photo was taken The image is makin’ a fortune - just think of its worth! Contest Write with the wit of Twain – Andrea Dietrich 06~19~15 If they had not landed there would be some reason for celebrating the fact. Mark Twain

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2015 5:21:00 AM

!!! : > )...Way to go.Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2015 5:28:00 AM

Thanks sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/21/2015 4:06:00 AM

Well Jan, I'M the one who took that picture...Times were hard so I sold it at a pawn shop for 20 bucks. Some guy bought it and now HE'S the one who's making the fortune (When will I Learn?) Funny stuff here my friend and congrats! - Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 7/21/2015 2:41:00 PM

LOL Tim guess you learned a valuable lesson lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/20/2015 9:02:00 PM

Scary picture but cute limerick! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 7/21/2015 1:12:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan x

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/20/2015 3:59:00 PM

Oh yes we all believe in them. If only we could get a photo. Congratulations on your win. SuZ

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2015 4:05:00 PM

Thanks so much Suzanne:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman

Date: 7/20/2015 9:56:00 AM

Beautifully written. I'm sitting here chuckling to myself.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2015 11:02:00 AM

Thanks James - you would be laughing all the way to the bank if you took that photo!:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 7/19/2015 11:19:00 PM

Nice day, congratulation on your win Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2015 1:02:00 AM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 7/19/2015 7:49:00 PM

Unique......

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2015 1:02:00 AM

That's me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2015 2:56:00 PM

Oh, Jan, I was wondering about another one being yours. I did not even guess about this one!! Congrats in my contest. I thought this was cute as could be.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/19/2015 3:09:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I'm so glad you liked it:-) I've had great fun reading the winning poems. Thanks for a fab contest:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 2:30:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your awesome win... LOVE SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 7/19/2015 2:31:00 PM

Thanks Skat:) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/19/2015 1:28:00 PM

Nice one, Jan, and deservedly so, jolly well done, me duck, Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 7/19/2015 1:30:00 PM

eh up Mr Viv so lovely of you to drop by:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/19/2015 1:11:00 PM

Congrats Jan! Now this is good, right? Are you made up? hugs! :-)))

Jan Allison
Date: 7/19/2015 1:25:00 PM

I'm happy to have placed so well so glad Andrea enjoyed my fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/19/2015 1:03:00 PM

Beautiful , i LOVE IT ! Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/19/2015 1:05:00 PM

Thanks Ralph:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/19/2015 12:03:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win:-)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 7/19/2015 12:11:00 PM

Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

Lycia Harding

Date: 7/19/2015 11:02:00 AM

Nyyyyyse...! Reminds me of a limerick I once wrote for my sister about capitalizing on her dryer lint. Congrats on your win, Jan! xoxo

Jan Allison
Date: 7/19/2015 11:16:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Lycia:-) hugs Jan xx

Carol Eastman

Date: 6/28/2015 8:48:00 AM

This would be great for the Mars Contest, too... LOVE that picture.

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/19/2015 11:04:00 AM

Oooh, Carols right! I think the Mars contest is still open, you should enter this.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:16:00 PM

Thanks Carol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/24/2015 7:53:00 PM

Someone would have been a millionaire overnight with just one pic! Witty take on the master storyteller's quote, Jan. As you can see, I'm still trying to catch up...

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2015 4:15:00 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by to comment.I am not at my best at the moment and have not been around lately. hugs Jan xx

Lawrence Eberhart

Date: 6/22/2015 12:06:00 PM

If the Martians landed today in a town or on the freeway, like a deflated spiral the pics would go viral then the press would have a field day.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2015 12:12:00 PM

True Lawrence:-) hugs jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 6/21/2015 10:20:00 AM

Hehe!! This is fantastic.. All the best in the contest!! :D :D

Jan Allison
Date: 6/21/2015 10:32:00 AM

Thanks so much Sneha:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 6/20/2015 11:54:00 AM

Haha, nice one Jan. So love the thought of Aliens coming to Earth Good luck in the contest with this witty poem, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/20/2015 12:08:00 PM

Thanks as ever for your continued support James:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/20/2015 1:32:00 AM

and to think my ex gf has a sister! :) hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/20/2015 4:36:00 AM

ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 6/19/2015 6:28:00 PM

HEY!!! HEY!!! With a little botox and some make-up.......and a few drinks....well quite a few drinks....who knows....This should tickle Andrea's .... well, it should do well.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/20/2015 4:36:00 AM

I hope she likes it John:-) hugs Jan xx