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ALIEN -NOT- HUMAN Alien life form--- ---Far from human toucH Living among it self--- ---In the heavens like a gurU Intelligence kept from civilization--- ---Scientist call it a phantoM Earth remains alone--- ---Like a secret ninjA NASA's top secret--- ---You are not humanN BY: . BY:

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/17/2016 7:02:00 PM

A creative cherry bomb, Skat. It blew my mind for sure. Excellent write. Just another of your long line of admirers, try not step on our toes please. Heh heh heh. Love you dear. Keep loving and living, sharing and giving. Much love to you though.

Beverly Read

Date: 8/14/2016 1:03:00 AM

Interesting formate. I read it both ways - across and then down each one. Don't know if I could write something like this and make it make sense. It seems very complicated.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/17/2016 8:07:00 PM

Hi Skat, once again you let your mind traVEL ALONG ITS OWN way and you come out with something special and unique in its way. I would definitely be in the Alien box. Now the question is did you do them both or was there a little Linda on the sidelines. If there was it is even more unique. Really like the way this one has been set up. Anyway my friend excellent work. It has to be a seven from me....Vlad.

A Yorkshire Poet

Date: 1/7/2016 4:09:00 PM

Outstanding, I love the letter play. Cheers.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/4/2016 4:50:00 PM

Very cleverly done! esp '...intelligence kept from civilization!' Just how much is kept from us! BRAVO Skat! Best wishes, Keith

Paul Callus

Date: 12/21/2015 3:49:00 PM

Clever and creative 'alien feet' feat:) ET is watching, and maybe reading this! ~ Warm regards // paul

James Inman

Date: 10/22/2015 10:40:00 AM

Very creative SKAT. Was it PD you colabed with here? Enjoyed.

Susan Clark

Date: 6/2/2015 3:47:00 PM

SKAT - what a great piece of writing - sometimes I feel like what you have said and I couldn't help but giggle - and say to myself ' that explains a lot about my own strange self at times!" Thanks for this great write!

Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 5/23/2015 4:04:00 AM

Very creative and intriguing write, NASA? Really. Great piece!

David Waldrop

Date: 3/15/2015 8:16:00 PM

Very interesting write. I enjoyed it enjoyed it a lot

Jimi Peranteau

Date: 3/14/2015 9:52:00 PM

Love the capitalization on the ends!

Robert Denton

Date: 7/8/2014 8:49:00 AM

Ho! I love this... really well done.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/1/2014 4:11:00 PM

Irma, u got me here, Imma sucker for anything double, double dutch, double entendres, double dactyls, double ACORSICS, twins!!! u get it? anywho, this ones tight!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2014 11:45:00 PM

This remains one of my faves. THe way you did this with PD!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2014 8:44:00 PM

i'm sure I must have seen this at one point, but I am sure liking it right now!!! good one, you guys.

Archana Garg

Date: 4/9/2014 9:21:00 AM

Great work. Your hard work is visible in this poem... Love this. Thanks for your visit to my page.

Jo-El Gerber

Date: 3/15/2014 4:38:00 AM

This acrostic is fantastic. Great job my friend, I never seen an acrostic with two sides and beginning and end on separators. Very unique I must say. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more from you. -Jöel

Don Johnson

Date: 3/5/2014 10:21:00 PM

area 51 comes to mind, or a more of secret time, the big eyed one forgot, he came to earth 4 what, it just slipped his mind, or not....love it babe....

Jared Pickett

Date: 3/3/2014 7:10:00 AM

I have been waiting to comment on this beauty since you posted it!! It is too bad this will not get the credit it deserves..:-( This is EXACTLY what I am looking for in my contest. Those of you that have yet to enter my contest this is a GREAT example!! Well done ladies, I have enjoyed this very much, absolutely a favorite!!Asavvy1

Robert Johnson

Date: 2/27/2014 5:14:00 PM

This is such an intrigueing poem. So creative and has a sort of alien perspective to it. Love it. GREAT collaboration Gals. :) Peace. :)

Heather Secrest

Date: 2/22/2014 6:35:00 AM

Wow! This one is amazing!! I hadn't really thought about how we (humans) be aliens also. It is a creative form, I'm impressed. Great write!!

Michael Alexander

Date: 2/15/2014 10:41:00 PM

just wow! I appreciate the comment and the welcome into the soup community. I hope to become a better poet and writer myself and learn from everyone else here. I love this poem by the way! Very creative and just, again, wow.

Tina Cole

Date: 2/1/2014 11:01:00 AM

This is definitely different and interesting too. But at the risk of sounding naïve I don't fully understand it. Could you enlighten me? By the way thanks for welcoming me to poetry soup.

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/28/2014 8:32:00 PM

A double acrostic! I haven't seen one on this site since I submitted "Happy New Year". Very clever.

Poggle Diggle

Date: 1/28/2014 2:34:00 AM

This is great!