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Alice In Wonderland

Alice took a trip to Wonderland By way of her marvelous dreams. Carroll (pseudonym)told us about it. Dodgson was his real name it seems. Every child whose read the story has loved it. From start to finish the same. Growing to ceiling from potion she drank, Her habits I think were a shame. In one book she sank to miniature size, Just so small she went down a wee hole. Knowing as I do all the troubles she had, it's Lucky she came out of it whole. Movies have been made from the Alice books, None so good as the books themselves. Oh, how frightened sweet Alice looks Pictured in books on my shelves. ***** were some people whom she met, Revolting were some of their ways. Strange animals too that I've never seen To meet them would scare me for days. Vicious were actions of people to her. When she got the courage to speak up, X marks the spot where they were. Youth and good nature were assets, Zealously guarded by Carroll for sure. 8/22/2014

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Date: 9/11/2014 9:10:00 AM
Hi Joyce, You obviously have a love for Alice and how clever to compose such a delightful poem based on the book. Congrats on your win. Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 9/10/2014 12:55:00 AM
Loved it Joyce well done ...Seren
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Date: 9/9/2014 2:22:00 PM
Joyce, this is a nice example of an abecedarian poem. Amazingly done. Love Linda
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Date: 9/8/2014 1:08:00 PM
a lovely take on Alice a superb write Joyce congrats on 1st place ty for your support hugs
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Date: 9/8/2014 11:20:00 AM
Well, we both chose fictional children's characters, but yours is much nicer, of course! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/8/2014 5:48:00 AM
Well done, Joyce! You chose a lovely topic for this form which you tackled so well; you managed to insert rhyme too...an added bonus! Congratulations on your top win:) Take care. // paul
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Date: 9/8/2014 5:02:00 AM
Very creative write and a great theme, Joyce. cograts
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Date: 9/8/2014 12:00:00 AM
Beautiful and lovely piece,Great poetess..Congrats on your superb win in this contest...
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Date: 9/7/2014 8:24:00 PM
Great use of topic to fit the form! Go Alice! Congrad's on your win, proud to share the spot with you. Light & Love
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Date: 9/7/2014 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce on this wonderfully written story Abecedarian style.
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Date: 9/7/2014 1:55:00 PM
You told a wonderful story here Joyce many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/24/2014 2:14:00 AM
Wow Joyce u hv done an amazing work! It's so very sweet! Sure will fly high! Good luck!
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