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inspired by the quote: ) "Dear alcohol, We had a deal where you would make me funnier, smarter, and a better dancer. I saw the video. We need to talk..."
- Anonymous

Inspirational Quote in Giorgio's contest: "Dear alcohol, We had a deal where you would make me funnier, smarter, and a better dancer. I saw the video. We need to talk..." - Anonymous
she has a dear spouse who’s no longer shy in taste of you, he’s gone wild in a mile dancing on his feet as if he’s in sky salsa, hip hop , jazz… mixing them a while his out of tune songs irk her with wry smile dancing with him in stinking smell of rum little by little you’re making him dumb he has been allowed since he has guts at once ignoring her lately was a whambam ‘til his demise comes in a short distance
Dec. 2013 Fourth Place Contest: Impress me with a small poem III Judged: 3/9/14 Sponsor: Poet Giorgio A. V

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Date: 3/10/2014 6:19:00 AM
Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, leo
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Date: 3/10/2014 2:56:00 AM
Hello, lovely Leonora, awesome win. ~ Love ~ SKAT
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Date: 3/9/2014 4:37:00 PM
- A wonderful poem posted for Giorgio A.V. contest - "Impress me with a small poem III" - Congratulations on your win, Leonora !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2014 11:07:00 PM
Hi, Leonora. Reading this one again. You should put the quote that inspired this one at the top above the poem!!
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Date: 3/1/2014 11:25:00 AM
Nice alcoholic action here you have shown " little by little ......making him dumb" and "til his .......short distance". Really active observation. Lovely penned, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 2/10/2014 4:23:00 PM
Hello Leonora, hope you are well. SKAT
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Date: 1/29/2014 10:06:00 PM
the last line says it all, sweetie. his demise came in a short distance. Silly fools and their alcohol!! It ruins so many lives!!
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Date: 1/28/2014 12:20:00 AM
I don't know about Dizains, but have a little experience with alcohol, and I reckon you got that right. Well done.
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Date: 1/27/2014 7:31:00 AM
I think you did this poem right. It is always nice to see that you posted another good poem....Hugs....Roger
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Date: 1/27/2014 6:58:00 AM
you did wonderfully Leonora, I can smell the man from here. amazing inspiration. Skat
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Date: 1/27/2014 12:00:00 AM
This is a tremendous Dizain my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here this evening! What a masterful poem about Alcohol, you did very well in describing it! Great Work!!
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Date: 1/26/2014 12:10:00 PM
- Alcohol makes song and dance short ........ no eternal lasting joy and happiness - Leonora, thanks for your thoughts and words about Alcohol. - Hope your weekend was relaxing and beautiful. - New week .... second chances :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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