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Alas

One's whole world changes when you lose the one you love, sell by date expired © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/18/2013 2:42:00 PM

Hello Harry, you are the best, and I wish one day... to express a smile in person.... xox~ Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2013 12:57:00 AM

thanks for your comments today. It's late and I need to get to bed. Otherwise, I'd search out your oldies. Hope you post a new one soon, my friend!!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/17/2013 3:35:00 PM

simple and so lovely exquisite write Shadow x

Daver Austin

Date: 6/17/2013 9:28:00 AM

I like nette's "bittersweet." This one has a punch. Love, daver

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/16/2013 1:41:00 PM

Alas, indeed, our world grows smaller. And some how the ones who pass get taller.

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/16/2013 9:45:00 AM

Very deep philosophy I see here in your poem. Wonderful expression on Alas with a very few words. The circumstance is very critical, but done well. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/16/2013 8:58:00 AM

Beautifully rendered with a bittersweet touch to the splendor of this gem... i like, harry!..:) huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2013 6:19:00 AM

Good morning Harry:-) Wishing every Father on the soup a Happy Father's Day.... xox...Linda

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/15/2013 11:28:00 PM

Excellent senryu. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2013 2:44:00 PM

This is good senryu writing, Harry and how sad that this scenario becomes more and more real for us with each passing year.

Timothy Jacks

Date: 6/15/2013 10:00:00 AM

I really feel your words . There's been alot of loved ones pass to the other side recently. but then again there is many ways to lose the one you love. Nice way to sum it all up

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/15/2013 4:47:00 AM

I cannot see that happening to you harry xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/15/2013 3:48:00 AM

One of your best senryu Harry..and all stated so true-Charma