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Alabaster Bursts of Heaven

Crimson's luster illuminates a brilliant bead satin strokes of beauty a bottle bleeds scratch softly across this barren chest and along with moonbeams shall you rest Silver streaks of goodness held in place passion's pure pleasure soon will trace circle past tiny smudges born in haste where one more night we shan't waste Starlit moments soar as solace sleeps dear reflection of radiance forever keeps in gentle arms of hope true love is staged consoling promises from battle's waged Alabaster bursts of heaven gently weave Another night in comfort we shall receive

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Date: 3/10/2017 5:27:00 AM
SUPER SONNET MY FRIEND. EVERY VERSE A GEM, ESPECIALLY THE TWO CLOSING VERSES. A fav and a 7....
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Date: 3/10/2017 3:05:00 AM
Wow Tim! Such a beautiful sonnet with a breathtaking title. A gorgeous piece of poetic art. A fave, 7+++++! many blessings to you :-) lynn
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Date: 3/8/2017 10:33:00 PM
Very romantic and great write super 7
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Date: 3/8/2017 10:29:00 AM
Hello Tim. Honestly a 7 on all counts including the grand and fitting title. Both title and entry fit each other marvelously. This entry is more than beautiful poetry with imagery. Be proud of such skill and talent and work that you executed. Well done throughout. And now I say let's here it for the sonnets.
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Date: 3/8/2017 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations Crazy good sonnet Tim, well done...
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Date: 3/8/2017 12:29:00 AM
What Chris said... That title!!! And that first stanza is a beauty, no wait, the whole poem is a beauty. All that wonderful alliteration. I LOVE this sonnet
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Date: 3/7/2017 3:55:00 PM
Wow, great poem Tim, a definate fave! so many wonderfully lit poems being written on the Soup these days, and this is most certainly one of them!:-)
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Date: 3/7/2017 3:03:00 PM
how lovable is your sweet pining...so well done, tim!..huggs
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Date: 3/7/2017 2:57:00 PM
In gentle arms of hope true love is staged-Love this line Tim.Sounds like a beautiful night of love and passion..Lovely poem.
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Date: 3/7/2017 2:36:00 PM
Excellent Tim. I love it :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 1:33:00 PM
- A really beautiful sonnet, Tim ... soft and magical love ... a big 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 1:12:00 PM
Hello Tim, love this poem.I was engrossed reading this poem. Enjoyed it.
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Date: 3/7/2017 12:20:00 PM
Wow not only was the poem magical and so well written but if there were an award for best title ever...this one would take it hands down.
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Date: 3/7/2017 12:13:00 PM
So beautifully written and well expressed Tim. Loved it. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB
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