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Air Lift

Bob was happy with his Mini Cooper It drove great, making him an in-grouper. But a hawk aloft dove speedily Taking the car in his claws greedily. Now Bob calls the hawk a party pooper.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/19/2015 9:12:00 PM
nice one!
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/19/2015 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, Casarah. Your poem "Stand by Me" is wonderful, unforgettable.
Date: 1/19/2015 7:51:00 PM
Great write about a bummer of a ride. Funny
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/19/2015 10:33:00 PM
Thank you, David. Your kind words are sincerely appreciated.

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