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Air Apparent

Will Hicks was angry about rear ends a sudden discharge cost him countless friends. It made a stinky mess causing him distess until he started to wear Depends.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/22/2020 10:03:00 AM

Creative work. Sad that this happens but sometimes accidents do happen to all ages. Sara

Paul Schneiter
Date: 9/23/2020 6:58:00 AM

Thank you, Sara. Life has. a way of providing ample opportunities for accidents of every variety. I hope all is well with you and your loved ones. Hugs, Paul

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/14/2020 9:09:00 PM

Disgusting! however I wouldn't change a thing....except of course, my depends:) This one is a keeper, Paul. Very funny. Nice to see you again. I hope you and yours are well.

Paul Schneiter
Date: 9/15/2020 12:55:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel. I vowed awhile back to get my mind out of the bathroom. But then I thought of Depends--a very rhythmical word--and, alas, I succumbed. In any event, I value and apprecate your kind words--and your poetry.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/14/2020 6:44:00 PM

Hello Paul … not to mention the embarrassment this results in. I guess on the circle of life we go back to where we began - thank you Paul - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 9/15/2020 1:12:00 PM

You're right, Lindsay, we DO go back to where we began. Lately, I've found, for example, I've been craving warm milk. That just validates what Ive always said about you: You unerringly state the truth. Hugs, Paul