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Air, Aligned

I wonder how many times a day Our breathing patterns coincide, As if my source of life, and yours, Conspired to keep us both alive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/24/2012 3:37:00 AM
Very beautiful Annie, sometimes very few words are needed to create such an emotional stirring thought! Peace x Ruby
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Date: 7/17/2012 8:24:00 AM
Annie - This is an incredible notion written in your artful style. Kathy
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Date: 7/16/2012 12:30:00 PM
and a super title too! :)
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Date: 7/16/2012 12:28:00 PM
Wonderful... your faultless cadence and off-rhyming are sublime. A unique take on the symbiosis of a lasting relationship.
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