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Air

It's in-between and all around, It can't be seen or even found. It fills us up and helps us breathe, It moves the grass and shakes the leaves. Some days it's warm, some days it's cold, Sometimes it's still, sometimes it blows. It moves the clouds and stirs the seas, It spreads the pollen and throws the seeds. It's up above and down below, It's everywhere we tend to go. TLH © 2-14-2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/17/2012 10:27:00 PM
I am a Gemini...an AIR sign. This poem reminds me of me lol! Some days I am warm and some not so much. I love this poem. Fav'd!
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Date: 7/25/2012 4:26:00 AM
an air of blowing by the wind, an interesting verse you have penned:)
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Date: 7/24/2012 6:25:00 PM
The invisible but most necessary thing for us all. You did it justice, Tanya!!
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Date: 7/24/2012 4:43:00 PM
This is a very awesome write my friend! Tanya, I haven't read a better crafted poem that this is a long time! Your flow you established in this piece is very tremendous! I really enjoyed this amazing write a lot! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/24/2012 3:41:00 PM
And thank heaven for it. Enjoyed mucho. daver
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Date: 7/24/2012 3:36:00 PM
Flows like the breeze that it's about...very well done!...Caleb
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Date: 7/24/2012 1:51:00 PM
I love the "flow " of this! It is very easy to read and sounds lovely. Very nice!
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