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For: Appreciation, Anger, Air, Angelic Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Sotto Poet


Art created by Deborah Guenther Beachboard
Live in the sunshine, swim the sea, drink the wild air. ~Ralph Waldo Emerson Air: an invisible stream wandering the curves of the earth, an unseen shepherd herding clouds and rustling up the rain that falls Air: an artist of the swaying trees and rippling waves upon the seas; as gentle as the morning breeze and in its care even eagles dare to rise. Air: is the life in infant's lungs, a quiet pulse, a mother's sigh; a carrier of scents and sounds~ whispered secrets love profound spoken words songs of birds Air: holds the perfume of the rain, and aroma in the fields of grain, the tangy smell of salty sea, and fragrant flowers wild and free Air: is the canvas of our world, it's in the backdrop of the sky when painted with the sunset's fire; it shifts it shapes it colors days Air: the lover of the earth, an eternal force that has no berth no bounds no walls no doors it slips through cracks it lifts and soars; it is the One connecting all.

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Date: 3/28/2024 9:50:00 AM
Beautiful poem on air. Deserved win in the contest. Congrats.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/28/2024 1:17:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/13/2024 9:46:00 AM
Such a perfect view of air, it entertains the senses. Your words are a realization of air's value.
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Date: 3/13/2024 10:13:00 AM
Right? Iir us something we don't think about, buy it is the most vital thing in relation to our survival.
Date: 3/13/2024 5:27:00 AM
oh, I do like this poem. The physical structure appealed to me and was quite effective. I agree with all that you said about air...it is the One connecting all. Fabulous contest contender & creative. Best wishes with the contest, faving
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/13/2024 7:23:00 AM
Thank you. Air is something we take for granted.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things