Aimless

Empty room, scattered thoughts, roam, dark wilderness. Sorrow reins, uneasy mind, do question, of grand design. Chart a course in sea's of vagueness, a fate still undefined. Clouded future, lost clarity, the path, uncertainty. Wander fields, a barren landscape, murky waters of distant plans, confounding the providence, my destiny curtailed.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/26/2023 4:57:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem, a poem about a journey of seeking clarity. I especially liked: Clouded future, lost clarity, the path, uncertainty I know that 'lost feeling.' so your words resonated with me. have a splendid evening, Sara

Mark Hughes
Date: 12/27/2023 7:03:00 AM

Thank you Sara, I appreciate you!

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/26/2023 11:26:00 AM

I can relate to this poem a lot. I have experienced this and you wrote about it so well. I know that lost feeling of lack of clarity with things in life. Keep up the great writing! :)

Mark Hughes
Date: 12/27/2023 7:04:00 AM

Thank you Heidi for your kindness!