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Aim High -The Pantoum Style

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~Aim High~ (Pantoum) Check the sky aim high and then just fly There's so much you can do, achieve Just set mind and focus today don't be shy God has great plans for all your life, just believe There's so much you can do, achieve Don't let bad things get in your way God has great plans for all your life, just believe Sky's the limit don't ever quit, to God just pray Don't let bad things get in your way Just set mind and focus today don't be shy Sky's the limit don't ever quit, to God just pray Check the sky aim high and then just fly! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 May.06.2016 ~Author's Notes: "The Pantoum" is a Malaysian verse form adapted by French poets and very occasionally imitated in English.The pantoum is a poetic form derived from the pantun, a Malay verse form: specifically from the pantun berkait, a series of interwoven quatrains. The pantoum is a form of poetry similar to a villanelle in that there are repeating lines throughout the poem.

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